Descriptive recount

Posted on December 4, 2014 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to Descriptive recount

  1. jmcnicholas says:
    December 4, 2014 at 12:48 pm

    Effective use of simple sentences and a wonderful metaphor used. You have also included a rhetorical question. Very well written Corey.

  2. emm.a says:
    December 4, 2014 at 6:18 pm

    SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. EMMANUELLA year3 says:
    December 11, 2014 at 4:10 pm

    FANTASTICAL Corey

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