world war two

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  1. jmcnicholas says:

    A nice piece of writing. Most of your sentences make sense and you have included some adjectives. Please read over every sentence. Right at the end of your work you should have started a new sentence when talking about ‘clouds playing’.

  2. EMMANUELLA year3 says:

    nice piece of writing

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