ADRIAN

Posted on December 4, 2014 by Deleted User
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1 Response to ADRIAN

  1. jmcnicholas says:
    December 4, 2014 at 12:56 pm

    A lovely bit of personification included. Check where you place your commas. Right at the beginning your sentence structure doesn’t make sense.

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