Creating suspense by Kimberley

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4 Responses to Creating suspense by Kimberley

  1. Ruby says:

    I loved the sentence when you said, ‘ready to beat the last breath out of me.’ that was really effective.
    the writing in confusing as it is all jumbled up so i had to read it on the preview but i didnt mind as it was worth it.

  2. ryan says:

    that is effective

  3. jodie says:

    Loved Everything about it kimberley it was marvellous ! <3 absoloutely loved everything single bit

  4. Emmanuella says:

    I loved all about it well done

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