Bria a very interesting piece of work, however I honestly think you could you have done a better job because you could have shown off your explosive writing skills and that is what I think, in my opinion, but you could/or couldn’t agree with me.
Nice piece of work!!!
Tobi
hey
that’s what i did 🙂
Bria a very interesting piece of work, however I honestly think you could you have done a better job because you could have shown off your explosive writing skills and that is what I think, in my opinion, but you could/or couldn’t agree with me.
Nice piece of work!!!
Tobi
Thank you guys for the criticism I will take that on board the next time I write
I LIKED IT BUT U COULD OF ADDED MORE PUNCUTION
My birthday is on May 5th to.
BUT MAKE SURE U LEAVE SPACE BETWEEN YOUR SENTENCE AND PICTURE. 🙁 🙂