Well done, your piece of writing is adventurous and has effective vocabulary. I liked how you included different punctuation like exclamation marks for excitement. Wonderful use of imagery throughout the whole story to give the reader an image and
I was very engaged about what would happen next in the paragraphs. Altogether this writing is excellent.
Love the work, Nikkala!!!! In your writing you include adventurous and an effective range of vocabulary. I admire the use of imagery you used in your work through out your story to paint/create a scenery of different settings in me, a readers’ head. I was very eager to discover what would happen next in the rest of the story, after reading a paragrah from this story. Also, your description of everything that happened to Kayla and the dragon was very vivid and clear. I hope you continue to write as out-standing as this.
Hannah 🙂 :p
Well done, your piece of writing is adventurous and has effective vocabulary. I liked how you included different punctuation like exclamation marks for excitement. Wonderful use of imagery throughout the whole story to give the reader an image and
I was very engaged about what would happen next in the paragraphs. Altogether this writing is excellent.
Love the work, Nikkala!!!! In your writing you include adventurous and an effective range of vocabulary. I admire the use of imagery you used in your work through out your story to paint/create a scenery of different settings in me, a readers’ head. I was very eager to discover what would happen next in the rest of the story, after reading a paragrah from this story. Also, your description of everything that happened to Kayla and the dragon was very vivid and clear. I hope you continue to write as out-standing as this.
Hannah 🙂 :p