My Step sister!

7 Responses to My Step sister!

1. chidera says:

   March 25, 2013 at 5:59 pm

   great work but u are in a world of pain
2. Ruby says:

   March 25, 2013 at 7:40 pm

   Wow great. Another story well written! (:-)
3. jody says:

   March 26, 2013 at 5:14 pm

   Thanks ruby thanks chidera:)
4. Jennifer says:

   March 26, 2013 at 5:18 pm

   well done jodi i agree with ruby
   just remember the punctuation in words such as : won’t. And also remember to make all the I’s capital
5. Hannah says:

   March 28, 2013 at 7:14 am

   Awesome work Jodie!!! I like that you have put your self in the characters shoes as many proffesional writers do in all their stories. Also, you made the story very effective. Good diary entry!!
6. Ruby says:

   March 29, 2013 at 3:02 pm

   I know i’ve already commented on your writing but reading over it again i found my self in the characters shoes! 😉
7. jodie says:

   April 7, 2013 at 2:25 pm

   thanks alot guys 🙂

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