Hannah a very lovely review, I think you have covered all the main points, as I have also watched it. I think you thoroughly proof-read your work to look for mistakes and your waork was absolutely faultless, because you have used a wide range of connectives, vocabulary and you even used the semi colon (;) correctly!!!
Well done and keep up all the good work!!!!!!!
Tobi
Lovely work Hannah. I loved how you used effective vocabulary and made the movie interesting. I know that you have persuaded someone who hasn’t watched the movie to go and see it. Excellent.
Hannah a very lovely review, I think you have covered all the main points, as I have also watched it. I think you thoroughly proof-read your work to look for mistakes and your waork was absolutely faultless, because you have used a wide range of connectives, vocabulary and you even used the semi colon (;) correctly!!!
Well done and keep up all the good work!!!!!!!
Tobi
Lovely work Hannah. I loved how you used effective vocabulary and made the movie interesting. I know that you have persuaded someone who hasn’t watched the movie to go and see it. Excellent.