Then what… part 2

2 Responses to Then what… part 2

1. teah says:

   March 23, 2013 at 6:13 pm

   very good but i dont really think the first line makes sense isn’t it ment to mean as i crept along the landing i saw a loose tile not a saw a loose tile but apart from that it is very very good ruby well done is there going to be a part 3
2. Ruby says:

   April 6, 2013 at 6:25 am

   Oh yeah. Oh well we all make mistakes

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