Well done Benit its a great piece of writing but make sure u read it to make it make sense
thank you jennifer
wow Benit! I’m curiouse I hope you’ll write part two of the story. keep up the good work
nice one
this is a great peace of work
oh sad dog
I think you should make it longer 😛
Thanks guys ! i really appreciate the comments.
I forgot to ask if you could make a part 2 as this is a really good story
I already did 😉
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Well done Benit
its a great piece of writing but make sure u read it to make it make sense
thank you jennifer
wow Benit! I’m curiouse I hope you’ll write part two of the story. keep up the good work
nice one
this is a great peace of work
oh sad dog
I think you should make it longer
😛
Thanks guys ! i really appreciate the comments.
I forgot to ask if you could make a part 2 as this is a really good story
I already did 😉