Well done Jody i loved reading your review it was very instresting
Wow how good a writer are you. as i read i felt as if i was the person held hostage.
great work Jody!!!
well done! Great use of language.
Awesome Jody, this peice of writing is fabulous, I adore the way you created a scary image in my mind as you are reflecting most of the things we do at school. I would probably consider this a Lvl 5 peice of work. Well Done!!!!! Hannah
you forgot capital letters
Theres a lot of wonder
what a great piece of writing
Great work but you need to put in basic punctuation such as capital letters and full stop. There also has to be capital I
It is good but please make it longer.
Thanks guys
I read the other one and i think its amazing!!
an excellent story excellent
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Well done Jody i loved reading your review it was very instresting
Wow how good a writer are you. as i read i felt as if i was the person held hostage.
great work Jody!!!
well done! Great use of language.
Awesome Jody, this peice of writing is fabulous, I adore the way you created a scary image in my mind as you are reflecting most of the things we do at school. I would probably consider this a Lvl 5 peice of work. Well Done!!!!!
Hannah
you forgot capital letters
Theres a lot of wonder
what a great piece of writing
Great work but you need to put in basic punctuation such as capital letters and full stop. There also has to be capital I
It is good
but please
make it
longer.
Thanks guys
I read the other one and i think its amazing!!
an excellent story excellent