creating suspense the last one by Kelsi

2 Responses to creating suspense the last one by Kelsi

1. Kelsi says:

   March 19, 2013 at 10:39 pm

   This one doesn’t make sense
   I corrected my mistake and
   sent it to the moderator
2. jemima says:

   March 20, 2013 at 1:57 pm

   well done Kelsi , a very effective story creating suspense and I was really engaged by it. I liked how you used short snappy sentences to make everything seem as if it was happening fast.

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