Very exciting idea and you have included your geographical knowledge about Mount Kilimanjaro. Most of your punctuation is correct and you used a couple of adjectives to make your writing more interesting.
I think you mean ‘vicious volcano’ and it is ‘we were’ not ‘we where’.
Very exciting idea and you have included your geographical knowledge about Mount Kilimanjaro. Most of your punctuation is correct and you used a couple of adjectives to make your writing more interesting.
I think you mean ‘vicious volcano’ and it is ‘we were’ not ‘we where’.
Miss Moncrieff