I like your ideas Tijai, very imaginative! You have linked in some of your Egyptian learning into today’s challenge. You included most of your punctuation, I like how you are experimenting with commas.
Next time, remember to use ‘we were’ and ‘there were’, instead of ‘we was’ and ‘there was’.
I like your ideas Tijai, very imaginative! You have linked in some of your Egyptian learning into today’s challenge. You included most of your punctuation, I like how you are experimenting with commas.
Next time, remember to use ‘we were’ and ‘there were’, instead of ‘we was’ and ‘there was’.
Miss Moncrieff