Fabulous ideas! I really enjoyed reading your work today. You included most of your punctuation and have kept your writing in first person throughout.
Next time, remember to include a variety of punctuation and connectives.
Miss Moncrieff
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Fabulous ideas! I really enjoyed reading your work today. You included most of your punctuation and have kept your writing in first person throughout.
Next time, remember to include a variety of punctuation and connectives.
Miss Moncrieff