Hi Ricardo
I like those two films too. Have you read the books? If you haven’t, you should because I think they are even better than the films!
To make your writing even better, try to proof read your work before you publish it: proof read means read through everything very carefully to make sure you haven’t missed out any capital letters, or have any spelling mistakes. I found a couple of spelling mistakes – can you spot them?
Hi Ricardo
I like those two films too. Have you read the books? If you haven’t, you should because I think they are even better than the films!
To make your writing even better, try to proof read your work before you publish it: proof read means read through everything very carefully to make sure you haven’t missed out any capital letters, or have any spelling mistakes. I found a couple of spelling mistakes – can you spot them?
I look forward to your next post!
Ms Isik
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