Hi Henry
I enjoyed reading your report about the City win last year (Mr. Isik is a Man City fan so he was very happy that day!).
You have a good reporting style of writing, but you haven’t used any captial letters, and I also think you need to look at where you put your full stops too.
Remember you need a capital letter for all names of people, places and teams!
Hi Henry
I enjoyed reading your report about the City win last year (Mr. Isik is a Man City fan so he was very happy that day!).
You have a good reporting style of writing, but you haven’t used any captial letters, and I also think you need to look at where you put your full stops too.
Remember you need a capital letter for all names of people, places and teams!
I look forward to reading your next report 🙂
Ms Isik