Hannah this is so amazing I am lost for words . Great use of vocabulary it indicated that something was about to happen . Will you please blog about what ‘s going to happen next as I feel as if I will guess myself which will go on forever . Well done keep it up !
well done Hannah , a good use of onomatopoeia. I liked how you used dialogue and punctuation marks. I was really engaged by your story. This story had alot of concepts we have learned in literacy. Excellent work.
Great use of vocab and the story is gripping
Hannah this is so amazing I am lost for words . Great use of vocabulary it indicated that something was about to happen . Will you please blog about what ‘s going to happen next as I feel as if I will guess myself which will go on forever . Well done keep it up !
well done Hannah , a good use of onomatopoeia. I liked how you used dialogue and punctuation marks. I was really engaged by your story. This story had alot of concepts we have learned in literacy. Excellent work.
what an amazing story hannah I assume that you are a level 5 writer the quality is amazing
This story is great. when are you going to do the sequel?!
I liked your susense story, it made me feel a little scared but I also wanted to read more of it. Please make a part 2 of the story, good work.