Excellent use of connectives to sequence your recount Corey. You have used the apostrophe to show possession correctly throughout your writing. Descriptive detail is included. Make sure you proof read each sentence to correct grammatical errors.
Joy – Aw This is so sweet. I also have a little boy named Emmett. He’s as slimey as this one too! Must be something about the sweet name! Thank you for sharing these gorgeous and bubbly photos! you have talent!
Excellent use of connectives to sequence your recount Corey. You have used the apostrophe to show possession correctly throughout your writing. Descriptive detail is included. Make sure you proof read each sentence to correct grammatical errors.
Very good recount
Joy – Aw This is so sweet. I also have a little boy named Emmett. He’s as slimey as this one too! Must be something about the sweet name! Thank you for sharing these gorgeous and bubbly photos! you have talent!
Dear Corey,
I like your blog and I am sure other people like it too.
From Skye.