Creating suspense by Kimberley

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3 Responses to Creating suspense by Kimberley

  1. Anonymous says:

    great suspense. It made me think about what was going to happen next.

  2. Ruby says:

    Kimberley that was amazing. Did she find her father? Did she get out of the hole? so many questions! make the story longer!!!!

  3. Jennifer says:

    the title matches the writing
    this is a lvl 5 piece of work

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