The Run Away

Posted on March 14, 2013 by Deleted User
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8 Responses to The Run Away

  1. kimberley says:
    March 15, 2013 at 4:18 pm

    it is good well done I would love to hear more

  2. Ruby says:
    March 16, 2013 at 10:05 am

    Make it longer. Why did they feel mysterious. Now i feel mysterious

  3. Ibukun says:
    March 16, 2013 at 10:32 am

    Thanks Kimberley

  4. Emma (100wc team) says:
    March 17, 2013 at 10:15 am

    This is a very mysterious story which would make a good opening hook to a much longer story because I’m wondering who does the voice belong to and how does the bath tap leaking relate to the story?

    Emma (100wc team)

  5. teah says:
    March 17, 2013 at 8:12 pm

    well done ibukun thats really good keep it up i can not wait to hear more

  6. Jennifer says:
    March 21, 2013 at 7:48 am

    it’s a very good piece of writing

  7. chidera says:
    March 25, 2013 at 6:03 pm

    i think u should make a part 2

  8. Benit says:
    March 29, 2013 at 9:20 pm

    I agree with chidera

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