ST.PAULS BY RYAN

2 Responses to ST.PAULS BY RYAN

1. lovell says:

   July 9, 2014 at 6:23 pm

   I ove that you formed your writing in paragrahs. But it is good to leave a space after a full stop. See after the word fun you did a full stop which is good, but after the full stop you should do a space then your word. Apart from that it is really good.

   WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2. Ainsley says:

   May 18, 2015 at 4:13 pm

   I like how you introduced yourself.

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