Deborah I Think you have covered the main idea ın your review , however you could have used interesting vocabulary. Nevertheless I Was very impressed with your review well done Deborah!
A very interesting picece of writing that gives me a clear idea of what the story’s without writing about everything, however you could have included your own opinion and used more effective vocabulary. Well done.
Deborah I Think you have covered the main idea ın your review , however you could have used interesting vocabulary. Nevertheless I Was very impressed with your review well done Deborah!
next time i will try and use more interesting vocabuklary
A very interesting picece of writing that gives me a clear idea of what the story’s without writing about everything, however you could have included your own opinion and used more effective vocabulary. Well done.