Good use of descriptive language miss Isik its a lovely story.It has a cliff hanger which real gripped me into the story. There is some spelling mistakes and remember ever new sentence there’s a full stop.Also when your writing I its a capital letter and if you see a red line under a word you need to rewrite apart from that miss I love your story.
I really enjoyed reading your story but the things you can work on is capital letters after for stops and the way you spell friends is like this friends and the way you spell thought is thought one last thing often you write next to the for stop.
yYou could have checked over your work and kind of make sure your sentences make sense but I did enjoy reading your story and also your spellings it was really not quite intresing
This story has a lot of adjectives. I think you should have checked your spellings, look for missing words and check your punctuation.
Spellings: freends=friends starnge=strange thort=thought tee shirt= T-shirt
Punctuation: use commas, use capital letters for ‘i’
Contexts: two= number to=going somewhere too=extreme
I love your descriptive language. However you forgot to punctuate some of your sentences. You did not spell friends correctly, This is how you spell thought.
It was ok but you need a capital letter at the beginning of your sentence . Also remember to spell friends right because it sounded like freends. also don’t need to write end.
Remember to spell friends properly and remember capital letter at the beginning of the sentence and full stops.
Remember to check over your work
I like it a little bit
Remember to put capital letters in the beginning of the sentence And full stops
and friends are not spelt properly.
Check over your work.
But good work.
I loved your story but your spellings was not really good you could improve on your spellings when you wrote freends and tee shirt well I did love your story.
You did do good writing. You tried your best in everything.
You spelled friend, strange and some spellings wrong and there are more of them.
WE LOVE IT.
I liked it but it made no sence
I agree presh
Good use of descriptive language miss Isik its a lovely story.It has a cliff hanger which real gripped me into the story. There is some spelling mistakes and remember ever new sentence there’s a full stop.Also when your writing I its a capital letter and if you see a red line under a word you need to rewrite apart from that miss I love your story.
Good story but a few words rong
I really enjoyed reading your story but the things you can work on is capital letters after for stops and the way you spell friends is like this friends and the way you spell thought is thought one last thing often you write next to the for stop.
yYou could have checked over your work and kind of make sure your sentences make sense but I did enjoy reading your story and also your spellings it was really not quite intresing
This story has a lot of adjectives. I think you should have checked your spellings, look for missing words and check your punctuation.
Spellings: freends=friends starnge=strange thort=thought tee shirt= T-shirt
Punctuation: use commas, use capital letters for ‘i’
Contexts: two= number to=going somewhere too=extreme
I liked it but you spelled friend like this freend and that’s not how you spell it this friend but its good
I love your descriptive language. However you forgot to punctuate some of your sentences. You did not spell friends correctly, This is how you spell thought.
I love your story but there were several mistakes for example you kept spelling friend wrong
It was ok but you need a capital letter at the beginning of your sentence . Also remember to spell friends right because it sounded like freends. also don’t need to write end.
Remember to spell friends properly and remember capital letter at the beginning of the sentence and full stops.
Remember to check over your work
I like it a little bit
Remember to put capital letters in the beginning of the sentence And full stops
and friends are not spelt properly.
Check over your work.
But good work.
I loved your story but your spellings was not really good you could improve on your spellings when you wrote freends and tee shirt well I did love your story.
You did do good writing. You tried your best in everything.
You spelled friend, strange and some spellings wrong and there are more of them.
WE LOVE IT.
Miss Isik you spelt friend wrong
that good I love it
It was a good story but there were a few spelling mistakes.
It looks like you really like snowy days
You described how it is on snowy days
you need a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence and that’s not how to spell friend.✔
you did not put capital letters at the being
I think your story is great Miss Isik. Be careful with your spellings though. You spelt friend wrong.
Despite all of your mistakes, you produced a great story Miss Isik.